PhD-Level Coach Education Rewrite

I have an AI-generated manuscript that explores coach education in sport, with a particular emphasis on how informal, non-formal and formal learning modes shape a coach’s knowledge, identity and practice. The raw draft already contains the core ideas and citations, but it reads like a machine-assembled text: the arguments are thin, the structure wanders and the academic voice is inconsistent. Your task is to transform this draft into a piece that would satisfy a doctoral review panel. That means tightening the theoretical framing around learning theory, deepening the critical discussion of existing coach-development models and weaving a clear, logical thread from literature review through methodology to conclusions. I will supply the current document, reference list and any supplementary data; you return a fully rewritten manuscript ready for submission, complete with polished prose, integrated scholarly critique and perfectly formatted references (APA 7th). Deliverables • A single Word document, 100 % original prose, 5700–6,600 words after rewriting • Consistent academic tone, precise terminology and defensible arguments throughout • Correct in-text citations and reference list (APA 7) • Track-changes version plus a clean final copy for easy review I will be available for quick clarifications and will give prompt feedback on each milestone draft. If you routinely coach academic authors or have published in peer-reviewed journals on sport coaching or educational theory, your expertise will be ideal here.