Project Description
I have an 85,000-word epic fantasy manuscript ready for fresh eyes. Your task is to read the entire draft and prepare a separate feedback document that walks through the story chapter by chapter.
What I need from you
• Honest, thoughtful content feedback—pacing, plot logic, world-building, emotional beats, and any parts that drag or confuse.
• A focused look at character development: motivations, consistency, arcs, and the moments where a character’s voice either shines or rings false.
How to deliver
Work through the novel at your own reading pace, keeping notes for each chapter. When you’re done, compile those notes into a single document (Word or Google Docs is fine) so I can see your chapter-by-chapter observations in one place. Please avoid inline annotations; I want to experience the story cleanly on my next pass and consult your report separately.
Timeline & scope
The draft is 28 chapters. Turning around the full analysis within four weeks would be ideal, but let me know if you need slightly more time to do a thorough job. I’m open to a quick check-in halfway through to make sure we’re aligned.
If deep dives into plot cohesion and character arcs excite you, I’d love to hear how you approach beta reads and when you could start.